I call him Gizz.
Born five years ago
He is my favorite
He is small, cute, fun,
annoying, whiny, and mean.
He is my favorite
My brother of less years than many trees
His mind like buzzing bees
He is my favorite
He has done many things,
like running free
flying without wings
He is my favorite
William Garrett
The greatest Gizzard of all
He is my favorite
I used repetition throughout the poem of one line. I also used end rhyme mixed in there a little bit. I used a little bit of alliteration in the last stanza, and also have a little bit of enjambment.
Reading Times
4/11 I, Alex Cross by: James Patterson 75 pgs. 1 hr. 20 mins
4/14 The Mark of Athena by: Rick Riordan 50 pgs 40 mins
4/15 Writing Center Meeting 30 mins
HAHA that is so your brother. I agree that our brother is crazy and fun. I love him. I dont think that this would make your sister very happy though.
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